I was standing there in the doctor’s office leaning on the counter.
Then all of a sudden, this odd feeling came over me. It started to get dark. "Oh,
it'll pass," I thought. It always does after a few seconds. It
didn't pass. Then I began to hear a loud, constant ringing in my ears.
That wouldn't go away either. It got louder and louder as the
darkness came in around me. I started to feel hot and my whole body got
that tingly feeling you get when one of your limbs falls asleep. My arms
felt like they weighed a thousand pounds. I couldn't hear anything over
the ringing. This strange feeling seemed like it would last forever.
I fainted.
Well, I've fainted several times in my life so I decided to share one of my fainting stories haha..
ReplyDeleteFor this piece of writing I wanted to try and keep it short, but get my point across at the same time. Sometimes I feel like I get too long-winded when I write so, I wanted to try shortening up my thoughts. I think I was successful in doing that, without losing too much information. Plus, I sort of want the readers to come to their on conclusion on why I fainted too.